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My crush

Lordson Ebenezer 2006 (Lagos)

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she comes online because of me
goes offline when I'm busy
chat me up when I'm free
keeps me online til 12
then who is she?

still she never calls
never gotten a missed call
is she a blessing or disguised?

how beautiful
she is so beautiful
they say beauty is in the eyes of it's beholder right?

if I was the beholder I would give my eyes to everyone in the world just to see her beauty

no matter how I or she takes it
it's what they call love
because I love her... she is the dearest to me... withstanding all

hope we fight through this

About this poem

It's all about my crush. A girl I admire, I wish I am better than now so I can give her alot

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Written on August 21, 2022

Submitted by Ebeniza09 on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAAXA XBX CCX A XXB X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 124
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 3, 1, 3, 1
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