If the eyes could see beyond their sights.



I had weird dream
or maybe all of them are.
I was Infront of a stream
of revealed secrets,the forever lasting scar.

I saw red turning blue,
hands full of blood
due to the truth's dug,
an honest but cruel view.

The one who became full moon,
was now debris when it had been known
that his light was a fake bloom
of nothing to be his own.

I saw the piteous rats,
whom had always begged for mercy
were turned out to be the nasty cats
selling lies for money.

I saw sins done in darkness revealed.
the gorcious roses at hold
causing by their thrones,
the hands to bleed.

These betrayals made me think
that the existing world of beautiful lies
if knew what happens during the eye blink,
the world would be paralysed.
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Submitted by khoulaj7 on August 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDXC XEXE FGFG XXFX HXHD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 718
Words 158
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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