Down comes the creepy hour

Feryal Rashdi 1996 (Kandiaro)



"Down Comes The Creepy Hour"

Before the dawn,
sometimes in night,
I can hear, feel, avoid
whispering sounds,
feathers of kite.

Swish swash, Swish swash,
Scuffles towards me.
Strongly hugging the pillow,
Just trying to stop imagine-
the view outside.

Irritable is what, I know,
holding on, induring though-
heavy burden on my chest,
Like a deathly creature set above
caught my body very tight

When body has gone in Coma state
when  paralisation  zone is On
After returning from scary nightmares
Down comes the creepy hour.

About this poem

Tge poem is about the state in sleep, when my body has gone parallisation & I feel like a creepy monster is set upon my chest.

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Written on December 13, 2021

Submitted by feryalrashdi on August 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A xbxxb xxcxx ccxxb xxxA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 526
Words 101
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 4

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