"Echoes"
Burning up,
coughing and kicking,
my eyes are playing a
pestilent game.
Rejections,
sins,
flaws and scars.
All swimming in my sight
day by day, night by night.
The sun doesn't wait for me–
who does?
Uncared for, unheard.
Voices ebbing at the bottom,
of the thousands of lives I live,
I cherish, I branch into
My intentions are pure
they see it through
rose tinted glasses
caricatures of me swelled up
like seeds in their minds.
dissatisfied.
disappointing.
disdainful.
despised.
like the tears curling up in my eyes,
I promise
to do better
to work better
to become the perfect crystallized amber
to admire
to work hard for
but
not to be laughed with
chorused with
snivelled with.
I became the version elegant quintessential,
the one people fell in love with.
a version of me–
can't even recognise me.
About this poem
Created at the spur of the moment, it's contains the closest I have ever resonated with my heart. I hope it helps and connives to anyone in need of these words!
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Written on August 08, 2022
Submitted by hermygringy on August 15, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABXX XXXCC DEXXXF XFEAX XBGXXXHHHXXXIII GIDD |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 816 |
Words | 170 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 6, 5, 15, 4 |
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