Angels and air

Lily Mae 2011 (Missouri)



Twice or thrice had I loved thee,
Before I knew thy face or name;
So in a voice, so in a shapeless flame,
Angels affect us oft, and worshipped be;
Still when, to where thou wert, I came,
Some lovely glorious nothing I did see.
But since my soul, whose child love is,
Takes limbs of flesh, and else could nothing do,
More subtle than the parent is,
Love must not be, but take a body too;
And therefore what thou wert, and who,
I bid love ask, and now
That it assume thy body I allow,
And fix itself to thy lip, eye, and brow.

Whilst thus to ballast love I thought,
And so more steadily to have gone,
With wares which would sink admiration,
I saw I had love's pinnace overfraught
Every thy hair for love to work upon
Is much too much, some fitter must be sought;
For, nor in nothing, nor in things
Extreme and scatt'ring bright, can love inhere.
Then as an angel, face and wings
Of air, not pure as it, yet pure doth wear,
So thy love may be my love's sphere.
Just such disparity
As is 'twixt air and angel's purity,
'Twixt women's love and men's will ever be.
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Written on August 31, 2022

Submitted by lily.mathews0902 on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBABACDCDDEEE FXXDXFGHGHHAAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,061
Words 229
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 14

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  • AwkwardForward
    Air and Angels (the "and" in the title doesn't need to be capitalized :))

    Twice or thrice had I loved thee,
    Before I knew thy face or normancy;
    So in a voice, so in a shapeless flame,
    Angels affect us oft, and worshipped [with no delay];
    Still when, to where thou wert, I came,
    Some lovely glorious nothing I did see.
    But since my soul, whose child love is,
    Takes limbs of flesh, and aubergines, (
     
    LikeReply18 days ago
    • lilym.52633
      thanks its about the death of my mom
      LikeReply18 days ago
    • AwkwardForward
      I hope your mom rots in hell, you fucking zionist
      LikeReply15 days ago
    • AwkwardForward
      Heyyy, I'm so so so sorry for saying that. Please forgive me. I'm sorry for your loss. It must be a terrible time for you.
      LikeReply14 days ago
    • lilym.52633
      why would u say that in the first place though?
      LikeReply13 days ago

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