God is the most jealous for first borns



I live for Tommy eagle eyes
mothers first born in the land of life
i am the youngest never left
no one else rules our family rights
first born owns my world before our mothers life
I was injured in a world that doesnt like
tommy eagle eyes
and hates me and children to watch
the  world didn't recognize I am just the youngest
and keep all the clean ones you got
three before me two yet deceived
out of Tommy eagle eyes
and the family he decided with
if problem of summer stings
and all the money from me they got
at least I know
I will never try to be greater
then Tommy eagle eyes
the best first born the world knows
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Written on August 09, 2022

Submitted by wblsm on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDBEAFGHIAJKHLMAN
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 618
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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