Blood, Sweat and Tears
I watched through the window into yesterday
Innocent you,
Abused like a virgin in a lare of sadists.
Fragile, sacred you,
Broken, shattered, grounded
I'm a repeated smash of rage
Butchered, like a dear
Caught in a trap of fangs,
Moaning, writhing, groaning
In blood, sweat and tears
Muttering for strength to keep on.
Lord of creation,
I watched you stagger on to greatness
Falling, crawling then rising
To stagger and fall again and again
With a will like something that holds all things together
But as an Offering could not sustain it's alter on the way to sacrifice.
King of glory,
I saw them mess you up; naked
Deformed, ridiculed and dirty,
You stank like a corpse,
Whip, dust and curses gracing
Your triumphant entry into Golgotha.
I saw you skewered and roasted
Then served to mother Earth,
But in her bowel never digested
So she purged you out the third day
Tell me you did it for the name
Tell me you enjoyed it but in disguise.
Tell me this picture has more impasto
Or else tell me it was but a journey of Love.
About this poem
The poet reflects on the suffering of his Saviour after watching a movie
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Written on July 23, 2022
Submitted by MasterPoet on July 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,063 |
Words | 239 |
Stanzas | 30 |
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