Love Completes



I finally got the piece to piece together the  missing pieces of my life
I paint the perfect picture and put all my pride aside

although I am not perfect, I am a purposeful human being
brought to this earth to bring bright, beautiful things

Mom has taught me to make the best of everything
meditate and manifest the malleable entities. AND embrace, engage in peaceful positivity
making it complicated for bad energy to capture me
teaching that love is just and not just a catastrophe
That's it.

that piece that I was missing was love
Love that comes from above and swoops down like a dove, love that's darting and dancing that comes from all around
from people that surround me with one sound
saying
“ I LOVE YOU”

But what does it mean?
Is it just a saying to keep me sane,
to satisfy the sadness that sometimes paralyzes and terrifies
the brain?

Or is it just ?
Is it actually affectionate, sympathetic and passionate? Is it warm and worth the struggle you go through to have it?

I think so.
from my family I feel a fresh new sense that's indescribable and covers every inch of my body from my head to toe  making
my heart tingle when we all fix our mouths to speak. saying that beautiful word that was my missing piece.

I finally got that peace for the missing piece in my life
making me proud and perfect and happy to be alive.

Just a simple word can change a lot of things. And a simple saying can make you complete.
I LOVE YOU.

About this poem

This poem is about how love can heal and fill in missing pieces of your life.

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Written on November 10, 2021

Submitted by erin345622 on August 06, 2022

Modified on April 14, 2023

1:30 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ab cx cbdde xffcG xhxh xe xcx ax xG
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,465
Words 300
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 5, 5, 4, 2, 3, 2, 2

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