Dead version of mine



I lost a very precious part of my soul
While trying to be the best version of mine…
The little happy and carefree girl is lost
While trying to walk in an unknown path…
 That girl is searching her soul but
her soul is gone in a dark path while
 Trying to be best version of her.....
The positivity of her soul and mind are
 Now fighting against the negativity........
She is lost in a dark and pessimistic maze Trying her best to come out of that maze...
She lost her confidence and gained anxiety Which became her new friend in that maze..... But the sun is rising in that maze and
She is trying her best to find the existing door of that scary maze....
She is trying to rise again and fill her soul with optimistic.....

About this poem

About a girl who is lost in herself trying to find real her.

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Written on February 10, 2022

Submitted by sonajaiswal005 on June 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKJL
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 732
Words 146
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

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