Begins with me.....

Priya Jivtode 2001 (maharashtra)



Today an evil inside grow,
From my brain to the toe.

Not of much that I know,
Not of much that I show.

why Iam left without any clue,
Everything happening with one is new.

Iam trapped in a bunch of crew,
neither I can breath, nor I can move.

why I feel so dark & low,
 Never felt a life time ago.

About this poem

This sonnet is about the insidious inside you who can annihilate your self. I have embedded All of me into this short verse that people groups of my age or less more shouldn't experience a similar brain bunches .

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Written on June 28, 2022

Submitted by jivtodepriya on June 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA AA BB BX AA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 303
Words 76
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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