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As my fire faded

Steyn Mulder

As my fire faded,
So my will wilted.

With my heated habits,
Too, my focus faltered.

Still my inferno ignites,
Once my sentiments surface.

Test my vitality’s vigor.
With my abilities acclaimed

But my rest reveals,
If my fire faded.
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Written on June 15, 2022

Submitted by SteynMulder on June 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX XX XX XA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 236
Words 52
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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