Untill the end



UNTIL THE END
When the first cry was heard,
To confirm that thing will be hard,
To suffer while you smile
Walk and run endless miles

Independency crawling from the moment of separation
Increasing the size while dependency enlarges
The mouth now receive from bleeding hands
Keeping in mind that what world welcomed you for

Struggle to differentiate you and your shadow
The difference being your function
Appearance with little resolution
Where most mortal eyes are open yet blind

When the blind eyes see eternity—
Eternity below the sun
Where it will not shine to you anymore
But only to you it will not shine

Oh! So the journey had an end point
What matter is what you did at every rest point
The invisible secretary use to note all points
According to the deeds on the surface used to appoint

Appointed to face the harsh reward of eternity
While other face eternal happiness
Simply because their eyes were having clear sight
Though the world of the blind called them blind

By kelvo selekta

About this poem

It talks about how people live wrongly without them knowing and come to realize when it is too late.

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Submitted by kelvoselekta on May 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXX BXXC XBBD EBCX FFXF EXXD A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,001
Words 183
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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