Life
Amber Baker 1985 (Butte, MT)
It twists and turns and makes you spin
The beauty of it never ends
You laugh, you cry, you fall to your knees
The irony will never cease
Your heart will fall and shatter at times
The love you felt will leave you blind
The more you expect, the less you receive
Your reality becomes the lies you believe
Succumb to things that numb the pain
The comfort soon becomes the bane
Through this darkness you’ll find your light
The bad times, you’ll see, were blessings in hindsight
With your eyes ahead, your chin held firm
New wisdom abounds, you live and you learn
About this poem
I wrote this poem a little over 10 years ago when I was struggling with eating disorders and being suicidal. I think the first line that came to me was “the comfort soon becomes the bane”. I have always been extremely proud of this poem. I think I finished it in 2011.
Written on February 09, 2010
Submitted by MerMer85 on May 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 570 |
Words | 113 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
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