Just tell me girl



Just Tell Me Girl

By Edward John Chicoine

I walk around so blue,
Not knowing what I should do.
\To make things right,
Something I never made wrong.
\And when I think of you,
I wonder what the future hold.
\Or will our love grow so bold.
Or will you treat me so d*** cold.
\I just gotta know.
What can I do?
To make things right with you.
Cause all I wanna do,
Is dedicate my life,
And my love solely  to you.
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Submitted by edwardc.85723 on May 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X AAXXABBBXAAAXA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 410
Words 99
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 14

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