** FOUR KNIGHTS **
Up to the castle rode four bold knights,
Black, white, silver and gold
The faces were young, but their quest was old
Black, white, silver and gold.
The first shone fair as Cupid’s bright quiver -
Black, white, gold and silver -
Smiling to see what the court would deliver
Black, white, gold and silver.
The second, an angel with long flowing curls
Gold, black, silver and white
But his eyes dreamt of home at the end of fame’s toils,
Gold, black, silver and white.
Three thrilled me, tall as the whispering pine tree
White, gold, silver and black
Noble head in the stars, he never looked down at me
White, gold, silver and black.
The fourth, I fear, I could not see clear
With his treasure held near, hidden safe from the world:
Silver, black, white and gold.
Still, bright he blazed, dear as the Light on the Shore
Steers home the Sailor, storm-tossed too long,
Riding the void of the ocean’s dark core -
Wise as the knowing and fresh as a song:
Thus shone that Radiant One, neither young nor yet old,
Beauty and mystery strange to behold, in
Silver, black, white and gold.
* * * * *
Suddenly - the gates were flung open and out stepped four ladies
Dressed in the finest of satins and samite,
Pale as the shadows of meadows by moonlight;
And all the knights’ eyes together did dance
At their beauty, and a cheer rose like smoke
As laughter broke out and they all spoke at once -
So delighted were they by the ladies’ appearance!
Green Envy saw each lift his lady aboard,
Then with voices still ringing, they were once more abroad
And into the night, with a jangle of spurs,
Like Heaven’s own imaginings heard;
Surely marked for adventure, fortune and fame,
Names to be honoured through every domain:
Four dazzling knights that legend would track, in
Gold, white, silver and black.
Thus, that sweet vision faded, leaving me sighing;
Vanquished, gazing at pennon crests flying
Till all had passed by and vanished from sight,
And the last of their laughter grew faint and fell dying
Into the great mouth of Mother Night’s dome,
As she reclaimed her own,
(To the vast unknown),
Counting them home,
Each one star-bright,
(Children of light), in
Black, gold, silver and white.
* * * * *
About this poem
This poem mythologises a real life encounter with four beautiful young men, spotted in a famous London boutique in the early 1970s. I recently discovered they'd gone on to become one of the world's most well-loved rock bands! Since one of their earlier songs was a sort of medieval romance, on a theme of unnoticed/ unrequited love, I was inspired to write on a similar theme, but with the band members as the objects of female fascination/ attraction. Like most of my poems this one lies somewhere between poetry, mysticism, painting, story-telling and song - a position I find comes most naturally to me. This one also has in part, a nursery rhyme or ballad quality, like a children's story of knights of old. In its original version there was an Epilogue tracing what became of all the characters, but space here does not permit its inclusion. more »
Written on 2020
Submitted by elizabethlouiseedwards on May 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | xAaA bBbB xCxC dEdE xxAfgfgahA xacxxii xxxxxxhe jjcjkllkchc |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,330 |
Words | 438 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 10, 1, 7, 8, 11, 1 |
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