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My minds view

Shardelle Mercer 2004 (Red Deer)

The less I do the more I think
My mind is like a broken sink
Running non-stop till its fixed
Feelings are mixed
I want it to only stop for a bit
I just need to sit
I want to breathe
It hurts
From what it's worth I'm trying
Focusing on a million things
I'm living, I'm breathing
I'm fighting the battle in my mind
More than before
I was close to heavens door
I'm glad to say that's no more
I'll push through it!

About this poem

It's about how my brain is seeing and feeling about how life is right now.

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Submitted by Mercershardelle on May 31, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDEFGFHIIIC
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Characters 415
Words 90
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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Shardelle Mercer

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