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Goodbye

Richard Ochieng

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I know tonight on her bed she'll lay
Feeling down and upset
Knowing I haven't seen her throughout the day
Hoping sleep can make her forget
Tears soaking her pillow
Wishing to me, she could fly
In her room stuck like hay in a silo
Knowing all I would say is bye
Forgiving me,I hope she may
But sometimes goodbye is the best way

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Submitted by Optimistic on May 25, 2022

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Scheme ABABCDCDAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 328
Words 67
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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