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Rat Trap

Adolfo Camacho

I’ve felt what it's like to lose one you love
Even though you know there's somewhere above
The time I knew you was truly special
But now your death will bring me level.
The way you smiled was mesmerizing,
and even though it seems surprising,
you made me so extremely happy
Until Hammy the Hamster died to my rat trappy.

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Elegy written in Mr. Benders class

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Submitted by amacho on May 11, 2022

Modified on March 15, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 323
Words 63
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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