sometimes



i

i open the window
everything's standing still
no sound's walking on the tall wall
i return to my room
and start walking on the edge of my mind



 ii

i open the window
a cat's sitting on the tall wall
leisurely licking the hands of time
our eyes meet



 iii

i open the window
the tall wall is dwarfed
under the weight of a crow
sitting on it



 iv

i open the window
a pale face
pops up from behind the tall wall
to watch the wandering scents
of the oozing night



 v

i open the window
the feeders are empty
the doves are cooing hungrily
so is my mind



 vi

i open the window
nobody's there
numerous footprints
are peeping through my eyes



 vii

i open the window
the tall wall is gone
i can touch everything
walking tall
in their essential gown

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what we can see through a window... and what a window can see through us...

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Written on January 23, 2008

Submitted by nooshin on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axbxc Abxx Axax Axbxx Addc Axxx Axxbx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 759
Words 170
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 5

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