Renounced Blood



Stains of crying blood on the shores of precocity
Where precocious less heedlessly conceives a new life,
With innoxious looks cryptically chasing material states,
When coital craving enchant erroneous belief,
and mindlessly breeds unwanted streams of renounced blood.

Bowling, weeping and wailing innocent blood,
Wasted away like a putrid and offensively smelling refuse, In a sudden and perplexing realm of fatherlessness,
Where orphanhood heedlessly embrace alien blokes,
to evade new streams of renounced blood

Unlettered  God-like creators of innocent blood,  
Egoistically obliterating unstructured hope of African lads,
In a baffled excursion of pubertal evolution,
Where manhood maturity usually immures boyhood immaturity,
And cryptically license new streams of renounced blood,

Lust and greed enchants ceaseless streams,
Where lost generations embracing pernicious tags,
In a podium of a freedom of choice and expression,
Which deprives progenitors to reclaim drowning progenies,
Who diurnally submerge below new streams of renounced blood.

About this poem

I wrote this poem due to the swift escalating teenage parenthood in my country South Africa.

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Submitted by hloditaba on April 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXBXA ABXA AXCAA XXCBA
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,064
Words 166
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 5

Tshoeu Hlojane

I started my artistic journey in 1987 as a songster, poet, songwriter and a poetry writer, performed and participated on various music and poetry shows and competitions locally, nationally and internationally i.e. Gospel Choir Concerts, Shell Road to Fame 1994/95, Entice Entertainment Music Talent Search in 1999, Hansa Pilsener Songwriting Search in 2000/01, Christian Poetry Association Competition in 2004, Vodacom Winter Wall Poetry Session in 2005 at PACOFS, Annual Poetry, Story Telling & Comedy Session in 2006 at PACOFS, International Poetry Competition in 2006 hosted by “The International Library of Poetry and shared the stage with the likes of Khaya, Nateas, Gift Maseti, LSB and many other local artists locally, and finally managed to independently record my own Afro-Soul Music Album in 2006 and an Apostolic Melodious Album in 2015. more…

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