Unfortune dismay



Idk if I am doing fine until I see the dawn
lose tender legs, weak arms
are not being part of me anymore
My legs are freaking out
the blotted stomach is not letting me dine
And yet making me sick.

I am high on temperature more than my temper
Dizziness is all around my head
Those moments of twitching carves makes it harder to tolerate
However, these 5 days can't take my charisma away. But Idk if I'll do fine until.

About this poem

I'm 22 and have started struggling hard with secondary periods of pain. It is tough for me to bear momentary cramps and all day long tender legs. Meanwhile, to distract myself, I took my diary out and yet wrote about the same suffering.

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Written on April 13, 2022

Submitted by ragnilamba18 on April 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 420
Words 86
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 4

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