You, me, forever



This is the last throw of the dice
As I am feeling awful
I want you back
So I’ve done something thoughtful
Just look at our faces
It wasn’t so bad
With you I smiled
But now I feel sad
In the last two years
With you by my side
I have felt nothing but love, joy and pride
Now I feel empty, lost and alone
And it upsets me that we can’t talk on the phone
I guess that’s my fault as I am to blame
I pushed you away with my anger and pain
I know I messed up and wasn’t too clever
But Hayley I hoped it was you, me, forever!

About this poem

This is a poem to my ex girlfriend that I am hoping will help to win her back. I left a photo album on her doorstep with this written inside.

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Written on September 04, 2022

Submitted by Alan.stevens1984 on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDEFEGHHIIJKLL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 540
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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