Blackness
There's blackness all around me!
I talk to my friend,
But he's not there.
He wants to take me out,
But all i want is forever sleep.
I long for Blackness.
I want to enter,
But something stops me at the edge.
My body starts to enter,
And slips into numbness,
Then my friend pulls me out.
All I want is a forever sleep and Blackness.
It looks so nice,
Worry and stress free - just what I want,
But I can't have it.
All I have (and all i can see),
Is a life without hope.
I can't cry,
I can't love,
and i can't be a friend.
What good am I then?
The Blackness will give me what I want,
And yet I can't have that either.
Please leave me alone and let me go to sleep, Forever.
I just want the Eternal Blackness!
Good Bye!
19 December '95
About this poem
This poem was written when I was really depressed and thought the world would be better off wihtout me, but I couldn't deal with pain, so I wanted to go into a coma. It has not been published.
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Written on December 19, 1995
Submitted by KoffeeLady71 on March 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDEFGHGFDFIJKALMNBOJGGFMG |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 800 |
Words | 178 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 27 |
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