When I'm with you.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



When I'm with you I want to live
For all that I am is all that you give
My heart feels full when I look at you
I skip when I walk to keep up with you

When I'm with you I keep in the pain
For to break you down would have nothing to gain
My garden blooms when you are near
I am so lucky to have you here.

When I'm with you I hold back tears
for nothing can break you - you have no fears.
My world ends with you so when we are gone I know that you'd be the only one.
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Written on April 02, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on April 02, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA BBXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 466
Words 112
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3

Heather Lydia Thornhill

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