A Sonnet On An Awesome Spotting.



Upon completing therapy, I peeped
my Sweetheart charting genius thoughts on her
absurdly fluffy fiber-back and gleamed
at classy plastered grass and tripped tree-fur.

I ditched the window, tumbling outdoors,
and scanned her land with pupil-perfect view.
Her plain mint blanket catered her gut-sores
with quick fry clumps and chummy chewy glue.

I tottered to her cute creative nest
and smooched her poofy mocha pasta locks.
I plopped into her pretzeled legs to rest.
“I love you,” I said, spying her tech-clock.

I wish I skipped last Friday’s writing class
and stayed in my Love’s lap surveying grass.
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Written on March 20, 2022

Submitted by SirManSquid on March 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BCBC DXDX EE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 611
Words 109
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2

Caleb Delos-Santos

Caleb Delos-Santos is a Junior double majoring in Acting for the Stage and Screen and English at Azusa Pacific University. He has four published poems and one non-fiction with West Wind Magazine, Outrageous Fortune, and GoldScriptCo. Writing helps him to improve his mental health. He dreams of successful careers in writing and acting. more…

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