broken souls



when two broken souls decide to embrace one another,
it will cause so many wonderful & different things.
it's like two pieces of a puzzle finally being put together,
relief, happiness & delight are shown in both individuals.

until an unpleasant thought creeps into the mind of one ;
this isn't but only a temporary fix to my poor broken soul.
then the souls ripped apart like a bandage protecting an open wound.
in that moment only pain, misery & torment shall be felt again by both.

and here they are again two broken souls,
alone again in this huge grim harmful world.
it's sucks they never got to say there goodbyes,
but that shows that the thoughts of one hurt soul
can ruin everything including themselves and others.
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Written on January 04, 2022

Submitted by judyk2006 on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XBXX XXXBX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 727
Words 141
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5

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