Love lost Life forgiven
My tenses keep me awake
Oh my what to bake
Bake a cake
Bake a "deal"
Don't steal
Life is forgiven when all that's lost is found
Why did I have to put you in the ground
My son
My friend
When will the pain ever end
End with a kiss on the forehead
Right between your eyes
Oh dear God let him see life
Life after death
When will it be
When I'm 21 mom
All alone to be
Be not afraid he said
Why did I go
He said one more day mom
Then you'll know
My pain will be gone
But my love remains
Remains on that love
You place on my head
I love you mom
About this poem
My life has been a whirlwind of loss, stress, striff and just life I guess. This is my outlet to live as honest as possible. It's all I have left. My honesty.
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Written on February 20, 2022
Submitted by crystal.everman12 on February 20, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
| Scheme | AA ABB CC XDD EXX XFGF EH GH XX XE G |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 548 |
| Words | 131 |
| Stanzas | 11 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
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