In a hole too deep
I laid on the grassy ground
With the soft dirt underneath me
I stayed there for a while,
Smiling at the sun
But then the rain came
And flooded the field I would lay on
All of a sudden I couldn’t smile,
and the sun was gone.
I started digging
I had no more energy
but to dig and pull out remaining blades of grass and already wilting flowers,
and soon I found myself
In a hole too deep to get out of.
About this poem
I wrote this poem about having a peak of happiness and it all just falling apart. How as time goes on you get worse and worse, until it seems you'll never get better.
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Written on March 03, 2022
Submitted by chloemedinam on March 03, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | XABX XXBX XAXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 406 |
Words | 92 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 5 |
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