Perfect



We’ve met at the underpass
Skipped my last class just to see and feel you again
While I was sitting on the grandstand, I watched you licking the pape
The shape of our love changed that day
The first time I felt that you are here
Everything was so clear, and I’ve started to like the things I feared
Watched the trees dancing
You said : ,, They look so beautiful at night’’
We got home and instead of coke there was a sprite on your night table
All different, but so.. perfect
And even if the young teenage me would regret the things I did that
night, she would smirk
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Written on 2021

Submitted by amyflemi66 on February 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKL
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 576
Words 111
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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