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Burdened

Ludy Bührs

Still free from burden, we arrive at this earth,
fresh from a womb into the flinty world
hoping to grow, get some kind of worth
to stand upright, have your new leaves uncurled,
moving straight up from the fragile and furled.
For some it works. Born for the best of ‘luck’
so it then seems. Their ladder won’t be struck.
Such a man thrives, enjoys the favor of power.
You don’t have that. Fate gave you chores that suck.
Life claims your juice of fruits till your last hour.
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Submitted by ludy_b on February 14, 2022

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Scheme ABABBCCDCD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 483
Words 96
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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Ludy Bührs

 · Amsterdam

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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