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Life aches

Adeduro Ifeoluwa 2008 (Ikorodu)

Elegy
He is wake while the world is sleeping
He cries for what he has been through
His thoughts screams "pls leave"
 
Her father curses her name
For bringing shame
She drowned in the sea with aim
She met love at the end of the wave
 
He took a blade and cut his hopes
His eyes turn cold
His heart turned to stone
Cause they never loved him so
They threw him stones

About this poem

It's all about a boy and a girl who hate life because of some mistakes they caused

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Written on January 17, 2022

Submitted by funmiade635 on January 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AAAX XXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 361
Words 77
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5
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