To be a woman



To coat the skin in body butter,
expensive cosmetics and fine silk,
and still feel unsatisfied

Gripping youthful pictures
with withered skin,
only then appreciating our beauty

To hide a frown through the guise
of a carefully constructed smile,
back straight, never causing a fuss

To be admired, seen but never heard,
praised for our compliance, submission, beauty, left invisible
to rot in middle age,
sinking into our incontinence

To become our mothers, the boldness, hope, indivudality of our youths erased,
To be a bird in a cage,
To be a woman

About this poem

This is my first short poem so I'm looking for honest criticism and advice on how to improve it. I spent around five minutes writing it, and it was inspired by my grandma. I'd describe it as a pessimistic reflection on the life of a woman

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Written on January 31, 2022

Submitted by lmmcqueen2019 on February 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXAX XAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 560
Words 108
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 4, 3

Lauren Matthews

I'm not in any way an experienced writer but I have recently developed an interest in writing poetry. I am 18 years old and derive from South Yorkshire, England more…

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