To be a woman
To coat the skin in body butter,
expensive cosmetics and fine silk,
and still feel unsatisfied
Gripping youthful pictures
with withered skin,
only then appreciating our beauty
To hide a frown through the guise
of a carefully constructed smile,
back straight, never causing a fuss
To be admired, seen but never heard,
praised for our compliance, submission, beauty, left invisible
to rot in middle age,
sinking into our incontinence
To become our mothers, the boldness, hope, indivudality of our youths erased,
To be a bird in a cage,
To be a woman
About this poem
This is my first short poem so I'm looking for honest criticism and advice on how to improve it. I spent around five minutes writing it, and it was inspired by my grandma. I'd describe it as a pessimistic reflection on the life of a woman
Written on January 31, 2022
Submitted by lmmcqueen2019 on February 01, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 560 |
Words | 108 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 4, 3 |
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