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My Moon

Primic Obani 2003 (Bulacan)

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My moon is just sad-
I know that she's not mad,
Sometimes my moon is just disappointed-
And she's not that devastated,
My moon always overthinks,
But she never finks.
Sometimes my moon is insecure,
But her feeling is obscure.
My moon is crazy-
‘Cause she’s moody,
And sometimes lazy
But she can make me happy.
My moon is so lovely,
My moon is you...
Jenny.

About this poem

I dedicated this poem to my betrothed.

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Written on May 29, 2020

Submitted by obaniprincessmicah on January 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCDDEFDGDGGHG
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 360
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
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