Me in a bit

Siddharth 1998 (Delhi)



I’m broken a bit

Struggling to find meaning

Meaning in this crusade for worthlessness



I’m torn a bit

Torn by the notion of being a hopeless romantic in the realist era

It feels like finding "the right one" just to break my heart



I’m worried a bit

As the whiskey has wore off

And soberness could be synonym for existential crisis


I’m overthinking a bit

Thinking about the biggest relationship I've been in

My lazy ass and this couch



I’m scared a bit

To let anyone know how I truly feel

Words are inane , these eyes know the deal



But I still I’m happy a bit

That I tried , I tried to make it work

That I was not not afraid to let my guard down and be vulnerable

That I lived as I wanted to

That I loved as I wanted to
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Submitted on January 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X B A X X A X B A X X A C C A X X D D
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 767
Words 183
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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