it comes and goes
it comes and goes, time
a fickle thing, shy and tepid
like the ebbing shores of his heart
it washes up and down
swaying slightly in the bask of the moon
time comes and goes
i won’t stop living
i’ll simply continue
and when i lost him in the war
my wind grew from a gentle breeze to a torrid hurricane
constructed from the sway of time and the ebbing shores
his name will be unknown to all that come after
and was well unknown to those before and during
but in my heart he will remain, an infinite lasting reminder of my endless grief and failure
of when i lost to time
About this poem
this poem, written in 2021, was inspired by a character from a popular video game, venti, from genshin impact. i find myself relating to this character in terms of a happy facade put on to shield peoples expectations of myself, and the feeling of loss that stays with you forever. i hope someone out there can enjoy this.
Written on January 11, 2022
Submitted by mornfulandringlorn on January 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A X X X X X B X X X X C B C A |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 587 |
Words | 127 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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