Can't Feel You Near



Draw me close O Lord,
I pray to the Heavens above,
I need to feel you near,
As I’m
 Thrashing about
In the waves
In the storms of life,
Hear me out O Lord,
I cry to the darkened sky,
Hear me and don’t ignore me,
My life is in peril,
As I’m sinking down
Into the ocean,
To the bottom of the sea,
So, hold on tight to me O Lord,
Cause I can’t feel you near.
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Submitted by lonely-blue-sheep on January 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

26 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGAHIJKLIAC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 363
Words 89
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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