Sentiment

Princess Alma Avela 2008 (Brgy. Patag, Baybay City, Leyte)



Serene droplets of rain
makes me feel safe and secure
forget about the sadness and pain
happiness that seems pure

There are times I feel like giving up
The feeling of being hopeless and sad
Got to prepare myself for some family meet-up
Anxious and would want to withdrawn
I don’t know what to do if I screw up

I would convince myself that there is still hope
That I must be grateful for my existence
Can't help to think of hanging on the rope
Yet know there would be a consequence
Parents, Family, and Friends would be sad

Want someone to help me get out of my shell
Who would not think I am a burden to them
Do things I haven't experience; to laugh and fall
Be there on good and bad times
That would not be easy at it seems
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Written on December 02, 2021

Submitted by princessalma.avela on December 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCXC EFEFD XXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 729
Words 146
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5

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1 Comment
  • S.Zaynab.Kamoonpury
    A lovely soulful poem with touches of hope found in nature and muse. Kudos for this beautiful one.

    Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, im new here but have been writing on other sites since ages. 
    LikeReply2 years ago

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