Unfolding



At the door of consciousness, whom am I looking for
In the pro-founded window
Lament, just remorse
In a veiled conversation with the heart.

Where does it came from, cannot bear the delay
Though a faint candle burning
Surrounded by illusion, inside my heart
Like a momentary puzzle.

Silence for a moment, sere thoughtless
Perhaps not visible yet
In the throng of thoughts, back to the astounding affairs
Struggle with fidgetiness to keep afloat, in the muddy water.
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Submitted by hakikur on November 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXA XXAX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 466
Words 82
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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