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Burn Love

Esma CS 2000

Love is not what I expected
But my heart is totally infected
By warm and fuzzy emotion
It made my life a commotion

I told him "I love you"
He replied "Me too"
It was never heartfelt
Very much misspelt

He is a door made of rock
I tried to open it with a knock
It made me burn inside out
Showed him my earnest doubt

You tell me what should I do
Leave him or ruin myself

About this poem

This is my first attempt in writing a poem. I hope this is not a mistake.

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Written on November 29, 2021

Submitted by etoileflaner on November 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXA DDEE CX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 372
Words 82
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
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