I Miss You

Alondra 2004 (Alvarado)



Since you and me broke up
I couldn't find love again
I don´t even know what-sup
Now I fucking hate men

I shouldn't but I miss you
its wrong that I still think of you

You promised me
so many things
Are you coming back to me?
Like you said last spring?

Said you wont let go
Then where did you go?
Just to let you know
I´ll wait for you tho

I know I shouldn't
but I always question myself
Do you miss me?
Do you think of me?

We sang a song together
Everybody loved us
I thought we will last forever
Cuddling in the bus

I wish you didn´t move
we will still be together
I just want to improve
I want to make us last forever

It hurts when we text
always so awkward
I always try my best
to keep on going onward

You say you became a ¨pimp¨
that you don´t care about anything
Can you once again be my simp?
I will do anything

For you to come back
be the old you again
my hearts is now black
miss the one you were back then

I miss you
but I don´t want to
all I think about is you
you are the one I´m writing this to

I want to forget about you
focus on myself
but I´m stuck on you
my heart controls itself

You said you will come back in my graduation
when I´m 18

Was that a lie?
Would you at least try?
I hope you do

I miss you...

About this poem

This is about an ex I fell in love with..

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Written on November 03, 2021

Submitted by alondraoseguera23 on November 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abab cc dxde ffff xgdd hihi jhjh xkxk xeae lblb Cccc cgcg xx mmc C
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,181
Words 261
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 3, 1

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