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I am a man now and have been through many ups and downs.
The people who once respected me now treat me like the clowns
I seen many good days and many bad days as i tumble through life
There is more to see even though it appears that i have to sacrifice

The world as i know it have changed before my very own eyes
The life plans that i have made is all been a bunch of white lies
Now that I'm lost in a maze of my own design i can't blame no one
I have seen the error of my ways i cant correct what i have done

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this poem is about the pitfalls in life.

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Written on November 01, 2021

Submitted on November 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAXX BBCC
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 502
Words 112
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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