I was blind



I see her at my class room.
Just today she joined our class,
Today her first day.
That's why she is in her casual dress.

I see her first time in front of teachers room.
It's seems it's just that I want.
I was stopped for a while,
But she Doesn't noticed me.

After enter the class room,
I leave my bench,
and take the seat besides her.
See try to avoid me.

I took her pen behind the bench.
She don't give any thanks.
I came back to my bench,
Becomes know, she was actually blind.

About this poem

This is actually short story, that based on the first love feeling. The love at first sight is actually brought too much expectations on our mind and heart. That make us blind, in that case sometimes we thought that in front of us is the wrong. At the last time when we become know the truth, we become realized that "I was wrong".

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Submitted by pikusdmp2001 on October 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX AXXB ACXB CXCX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 465
Words 97
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Priyanka Shil

Birthday: 21jul,2001 Academic year: B.Sc 3rd year (geography honours) , from siliguri college under the university of North Bengal. Address:West Bengal, India, Dakshin Dinajpur. more…

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