As you..

Jubiya 2014 (Delhi)



Everything turns grey around
me, a starving being;
as you disengage your hands
from these craving hands of mine.

Two colours unrepetantly mixed
forming a new shade
everyone got fascinated, only I
saw the pain of leaving the genuineness.

Human writes to stars,
"Why do you break?"
it whispers, "It makes the happy,
and I want them smile."

You disappeared, leaving a note that I
need no one, as I'm smiling on my own.
But my dear, you aren't a star,
but that moon,  which gives me peace.

About this poem

Thiss is not a love you poem purely, but can be read as one, confessing his/her feelings.

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Written on October 16, 2021

Submitted by jubiyakhatoon on October 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXAX XXXX AXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 490
Words 92
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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