Raindrops On My Hand



Your Ignorance has taken a comfortable
seat in  my peaceful temple.
My love stretches for you like a rubber band with missing elastic.
 I hate to fell this way, but then ensued your actions that you display.
My emotions took control
The love on the leash lets go
Then left stranded
Now I'm parched with no available well
So when the clouds burst, I wish for the rain to dwell.

About this poem

Raindrop s On My Hand is to explain in a deeper way of how It feels to lose love or can't find it and then discover it for the first time or again. In any relationships or spirituality & etc.

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Written on October 08, 2021

Submitted by SunriseSunsetAmor on October 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABCDEFGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 368
Words 70
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

Zionana Aiken

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