Thorough in vice.

Briana Jaramillo 1991 (Rhode island)



For a moment
Everything stopped
Cause I didn’t care.

The sky started to rain
The waves started to
Pick up, the ocean was silent.

It was felt just for a
Moment like a dime that
Falls on the ground. That
Noise for ever it sounds, but just
A little bit.

Cause for you,
I watched the ocean.
And waited.

While waiting I saw the
Sun shine on the water.
Watched as the gulls
Cried back and forth.
Watched as crabs moved
About.

and thought to myself
Theirs more then just
Existence.

Beauty lies in fields
And mountains. Where
Every eye can see.

And internally
I waited for the
Snow in winter,
The flowers of spring.
The burn of the sun, and
The leaves that

About this poem

A poem about a moment, self recollection.

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Written on October 01, 2021

Submitted by bril.37856 on October 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXB XCA DEEFX CXX DGXXXX XFX XBH HDGXXE
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 628
Words 124
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5, 3, 6, 3, 3, 6

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