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Freeze thoughts

Owen Twort

Sunrise is too long away
Please see light of this day
Thoughts hurt sometimes
Don’t be afraid

Alone with only screen light
Together we can fight
Hold away the pull of self hate
Let the sunrise calm and sedate

Chorus
Please freeze those thoughts
Say what you say but stamp them away
Please freeze thoughts I pray
Don’t cut your life away

Self hate makes me hide
Slashing away shattered pride
Broken forever by her lies
I will turn and reprise

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For a pal who was going through a hard time

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Written on January 09, 2021

Submitted by on September 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BBCC XXAAA DDEE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 81
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4
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