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The sun is going down

Kamila 2000

The sun is slowly going down,
And summer breeze glides down my skin.
The moves of water calm me down,
The sounds of sax and guitar strings.

Amazing views and birds around,
I reach some joy and, maybe, peace
And while I stare at rosy clouds
I feel nostalgic bittersweet
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Written on 2021

Submitted by kamila_21 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 261
Words 50
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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Kamila

Kamila has been interested in writing and poetry since she was 11 years old. She speaks 3 languages: English, Russian and a bit of Italian. Her mother tongue is Russian, but she prefers writing in English, though there are some poems in Russian. more…

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