Whisper

Jose Lopez 1971 (San Juan)



Sweet like a candy
softly like a silk
blowing a kiss
feeling you in my lips.

Filled with rose petals
fading autumn leaves
swimming in a prairie
sailing away in the seas.

Just a whisper!!
just a tiny secret
just your lovely voice
come to me
my windy fairy!!
Its a sound
a solemn, a pure one
so quiet, so alone
it couldn’t found
a prince fellow.

Just a blow
just a wind
no one will knows really
how does it feels?
Whisper!!
let me be your angel spirit!

Jose Luis Lopez
Puerto Rico

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Written on November 10, 1989

Submitted by poetacristo47 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXXX XXAX BCXAADXXDE EXAXBC XE
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 455
Words 94
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 10, 6, 2

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