Come Undone
You have already stripped me bare
My body with you I now do share
Now you want to know my thoughts
And all the emotions that I have sought
You want to know more about me
But you don’t share to same degree
You haven’t come undone so far
I just feel more naked than you truly are
Not sure if you’re scared or hiding
Trusting me could not be your liking
Maybe I am not the one in your view
Not someone to share all about you
Let me know what I can do more
So you can let me walk thru your door
I am an open book in your hand
Add your pages there, let it expand
Life was empty, but then you came along
Giving me a song to sing, a purpose to belong
But moving slow are you in your called process
Why not just take my hand, together progress
Tell me all your dark hidden secrets
All your fantasies and forbidden regrets
Life is fun and true when it can be shared
So let down your inhibitions as I am all bared
About this poem
For people who want to know more about the other but are scared to disclose about themselves…or share their lives with you…
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Written on July 29, 2021
Submitted by Maheshw on July 30, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AAXXBBCC DDEEFFGG HHIIXXJJ |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 888 |
Words | 188 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8, 8 |
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