Something’s Missing Somewhere



Now that you are me and I you
And the leaves glitter, with the morning dew
How is it that, you not feel the same
How is it that, you see no pain
Where do you look my friend
What is it, that I missed to mend
Why do hide what you see
Why do hide what you feel
 
Do you feel, that you have wronged
Or is that, you know that song
Do you feel, filled with shame
Or is that, your tongue has left you lame
Why is it that, you cannot prove
What you really think you need to do
Why is it that, you cannot enact
What you really think you ought to track
 
Think not of yourself alone
For I am you and you me
And I was never a "wanna" be
Yet I found you by my side
Taking in with me every stride
Hold out your hand for me to take
And that's my  promise, never to break
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Written on June 02, 1999

Submitted by Maheshw on July 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABXCCDX XXBBXAXX XDDEEFF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 742
Words 166
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 7

Mahesh Wadhwani

I always apologize for the length of my text as that’s the best way for me to communicate rather than verbally!! Not a man of many words but still manage to doodle when in mood to write, which is rare!! I am not even sure if what I scribble is poetry or even what form or just words that rhyme!! To me writing is an art, a sign of creativity and a means of expression. I don't really think that anyone can just write without any feelings, without having felt, without having lived, experienced or cherished. Whatever one writes, there is some amount of a persons own feelings and presence or of those around them, indicated in the works. So I am thankful to all the people in my life and those yet to come for having given me life, love, happiness and even pain. At-least I have had the opportunity to feel it , live it and express it, whatever it maybe. Cheers! more…

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